Monday, 19 May 2014

Purpose: Describe a moment in time for the soldiers.
WALT : Describe what and how the ANZAC soldiers would have:
1- Seen, 2- Felt, 3-Heard, 4- Smelt onboard the ship as they waved    
                     goodbye to their loved ones on their way to WAR!

As I sat on the edge of the large, hard steel ship with my legs dangling limply over board I could see…….My children waving my wife crying.

I felt...nervous I had to go to war. I didn’t want to leave my family.
I could hear...children crying, my wife screaming painfully.

I could smell...smoke coming from the engin.

I was thinking… that l may not come back to New Zeland.

I could smell my wifes...perfume on my uinfrom its smelt like strawberrise.

By Lynette



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  2. Wow lynette You need to think to yourself does it make sense and does the font and color suit?